Ren Izamu
Posts : 4
Join date : 2012-06-16
Age : 29
Location : Konoha
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Main Characters Name: Ren Izamu Nara
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 | | Subject: Ren Izamu Nara Sat Jun 16, 2012 10:21 pm | |
| Character InfoCharacter's Name: Ren Izamu Nara Age: 14 Gender: Male Appearance: - Spoiler:
He's 5'8" height and his skin is a little tanned. He has straight medium length black hair and Emerald green eyes that shine even in the darkness of the night like a cat. He was normally muscular. He wears a black sleeveless muscle shirt under a black coat, black pants with pockets, for scrolls if needed and other such things, he also wear black shinobi sandals. He's also wearing a pair of black fingerless gloves with metal bands on them and had the Kanji for Courage on them. Along with his kunai pouch strapped to his right thigh and shuriken pouch on his left. • Height: 5'8" • Weight: 100 pounds • Eyes: Emerald Green • Hair: Straight, Medium in length, Black • Body Type: Athletic, his body is mostly in shape Personality: Ren personality is somewhat simple. Ren provides a friendly attitude when meeting for the first time. Although being very outgoing and friendly, Ren doesn't show mercy to those who betray their village or worse, if they betray their friends. Teamwork to him means everything. He believes that teamwork can overcome anything no matter what. To him, having a friend is like finding your true happiness, he honor friendship, honor, teamwork, but he mostly honor his friend and family over anything else. Nindo: " My nindo is to protect those I care about, always being there for them, and always manage to make them smile, even in the presence of death" Extra Info: If you somewhat managed to hurt one of his friends, then Kami better have mercy on your soul, because to Ren, that is the time to be merciless and unleash hell upon your life.The ShinobiOrigin: Konoha Ninja Rank: Genin Hidden Village: Konohagakure no Sato Clan: Nara Kekkei Genkai: NA Elemental Affinity: Wind Release The BackgroundHistory:-Pre academy- Spoiler:
Being born into the Nara meant Ren was born into the best Shadow manipulator and extremely Intelligent members in Konoha. His father and mother were active Shinobi, His Father and Mother were Jounin, so they could not be in the house all the time for him, but that din't stop the family for being close and a happy one. At the age of five his father helped him unlock his chakra, and his father also taught him many tactical and many strategy games to develop his intelligence, his mother taught him...or more like drive her point across how to be chivalrous, and always respect Kunoichi, of course being glared at and releasing some KI by his mother can do that to a child to get the point across, she also taught him more complex thing like weapon training, taijutsu and genjutsu, when he asked his father and mother why not teaching him ninjutsu, his parents laughed and tell him that he was just a eight year old, and he only learning genjutsu to know how to dispel them in the near future, when his 9 birthday came, his parents happily told him that he will be enrolled to the academy tomorrow, Ren just smiled a happy grin and tackled his parents, saying thank you over and over again.
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Ren tackled the academy with everything he has and then some in those 5 years in the academy, he did well in the taijutsu matches, coming out 8 place of the top 10 of the class, his intelligence was outstanding for someone his age, he was able to respond question left and right when their teacher asked him something or when it was on paper, his weapon skill was ok for someone his age, he was able to throw the weapons with great accuracy, almost hitting the bull-eye in every throw, he din't have much trouble going over the 3 jutsus the academy taught to him, the only problem was his clone, but after a talk with his father, they discovered that he was using a little much chakra than required for the jutsu, making his clones come out a little pale and weak, but after one week of chakra training with his father and mother, his problem with the clone was resolved, he made several friends in his class, mainly because he always took his time to help his possible comrades learn their techniques or solving difficult question in their test, and helping those that always needed his help, when the time for the exams came, Ren passed with flying color, his exams test was outstanding, he responded every question. his weapons throwing skill were ok, he hit out of the ten target, five were bulls-eye and the other four were close to the bulls-eye, one of them was a little ways of the bull-eye, but it was a good score nonetheless, his ninjutsu test was a little harder for him, because he was nervous that he will make his clone like it was before again, so with a deep breath, he performed the transformation jutsu, he transformed into his father, one of the academy instructor who knew his father congratulated him in a job well done, seeing no error in the technique, then came the replacement jutsu, replacing himself with a log, the teacher looked at each other and wrote down his score, then came the clone jutsu, this is were he panicked a little, but after some time, he pulled himself together, and did the necessary handseal and did the jutsu, making three perfect clones with no error, the teacher gave a round applause to Ren for a job well done, and told him to come and collect his headband, after tying it loosely to his neck, he gave a bow to his teachers and dashed home to deliver the wonderful news to his parents.
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After a celebration party was done by the whole clan, his parents put him aside and told him now that the real training will begin, and they will make him the best Wind user in Konoha, since when he was 12 and still in the academy, he discovered that his affinity was Wind, so with more determination, Ren practiced to use his wind chakra, but he din't use any technique, but now that he was a genin, his parents were going to let him do some wind jutsu now. Ren looked a little pale at seeing his parents with sadistic grins on their faces, he hoped beyond hope that he wouldn't die thanks to his parents sadistic training now that he was a genin.
Even before he was a genin, Ren was well suited for using chakra and was suspected to learn how to use and master the shadow manipulation soon as well to be the best wind user, and with his parents somewhat training boot camp, he have no doubt that some day he will learn all his clan techniques and be the best wind user.
Skills and AbilitiesAdvanced Skills:• Ninjutsu: 2 • Genjutsu: 1 • Taijutsu: 1 • Kenjutsu: 0 • Weapons Master: 1 • Puppetry: 0 • Fuuinjutsu: 0 • Ijutsu: 0 • Kyujutsu: 0 Unique Abilities:• Major: Great Intellect: +5 Intelligence free • Major: Great Chakra Control: Reduce the amount of chakra used for a Ninjutsu by 1/4. • Major: Blow you away: His wind release are one rank more stronger. • Minor: Nara Clan: Gains access to learn all clan jutsus. • Minor: Adept at Ninjutsu: Learns Ninjutsu quickly, due to his expanded chakra reserves, he is able to spend more chakra practicing jutsu. (100 less words when learning Ninjutsu) Weaknesses:• Major: Chivalrous: Thanks to his mother training and respect for Kunoichis, Ren has trouble fighting women for the fact he will hold back his abilities and will do what he can to keep from killing the women. Ren will not kill a women unless he has no other choice and will hold back his abilities by a 1/4th of what they are for 5 posts before he will use his full abilities against a Women. • Major: Not a fire person: Can never learn fire techniques • Minor: Wind + Fire= Inferno: Fire release against Ren are counted one rank above Stats:• Strength: 5 • Constitution: 4 • Stamina: 5 • Dexterity: 4 • Speed: 5 • Intelligence: 8 (+2) • Wisdom: 6 • Charisma: 3 Role-play Sample: This is from another site I am onRen just looked as Death left the area with Trouble still unconscious, but before they leave he feel in his back a pulse of dark aura...and then pain he never felt before wracked trough his body, he could feel the dark aura making him stronger, affecting his arms, making the muscle in them contract and tense, making them stronger, he feel like he could punch trough a tree or wall and it probably wouldn't hurt him, the legs were next, pulling and contracting the muscle, making them stronger, faster, and more agile, Ren could feel like running a marathon and not get tired, then came the his hands and feet...he feel an incredible amount of pain in his nails, as they were replaced by claws, Ren looked at his newer set of claws and say. " What the hell is happening to me...ARRGGHH!" Ren doubled over in pain as his upper body was next, his pecs and abs contracted and pulled the muscles there, making them stronger, his back also got more stronger, his lungs were working over time as well as his heart, pumping blood and air to his pain filled body, but then came his head, his eyes hurt a lot, as they gained better eyesight, as swell as slit instead of round pupils, his brain hurt a lot also, he feel like it was getting bigger or something, or was it just the pain screwing with his mind, then he tasted blood in his mouth and down his throat as his gums stretched, making room for more deadlier set of teeth and canines. As the pain finally leaved his body, he breathed a sigh of relief and just stood there in the ground, blinking his eyes and wondering. " What in Qinta's name just happened".
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| | Subject: Re: Ren Izamu Nara Tue Jun 19, 2012 2:52 pm | |
| Unique Abilities:
• Minor: Great Intellect: +5 Intelligence free. This is actually a Major UA, just change from major to minor and you wil be fine.
Weaknesses:
• Major: Hopeless at Puppetry (cannot manipulate puppets, human or not, with chakra) This one I got a bit of an issue with, I don't ever really seeing your character using these such skills and a weakness needs to balance out a character better. Now if you want you can add to it when fighting against puppet users intelligence and wisdom drops by 2. So it would look like this.
Example:
• Major: Hopeless at Puppetry - Cannot manipulate puppets, human or tools, with chakra and when facing users that use puppet manipulation Ren will loose 2 points from wisdom and intelligence while facing someone using puppet manipulation and for 2 posts after.
• Major: Chivalrous: Thanks to his mother training and respect for Kunoichis, Ren has trouble fighting women for the fact he will hold back his abilities and will do what he can to keep from killing the women. Ren will not kill a women unless he has no other choice and will hold back his abilities by a 1/4th of what they are for 3 posts before he will use his full abilities against a Women. This needs to be for five posts not three than that will be fine
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Just fixes those things and I would see no issues with your app. | |
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Ren Izamu
Posts : 4
Join date : 2012-06-16
Age : 29
Location : Konoha
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Main Characters Name: Ren Izamu Nara
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| | Subject: Re: Ren Izamu Nara Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:44 pm | |
| Edited and removed the hopeless at puppetry. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Ren Izamu Nara Tue Jun 19, 2012 9:08 pm | |
|  Okay looks good and I see you are taking the free major and minor gof for you; all approved. | |
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