Takii Yoruichi

Character Info
Character's Name: Takii Yoruichi
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance: Takii is always in her red and white robes
* Height: 5 feet and 1 inch tall
* Weight: 120
* Eyes: Golden Brown
* Hair: brown and very long, Takii always has her hair up in a high ponytail
* Body Type: Takii is a very curvy girl
Personality: Takii can be very brash, saying what shouldent be said at times causing her to come off as a instigator but she really isent. She loves being around people and is very playful with her friends. Around strangers she puts on a tough front often challenging the other person. Takii tends to be a very agressive fighter, she is very quick using her power and speed to her advantage she still gets too cocky and wont give in easily. The longest battle she was in lasted about 2 days.
Nindo: "Fight or Die"
Extra Info: She's a looker with many dark secrets.

The Shinobi
Origin: Sunagakure
Ninja Rank: Genin
Hidden Village: Sunagakure no Sato
Clan: None
Kekkei Genkai: None
Elemental Affinity: Wind

The Background
History
~Birth and childhood
Takii's mother passed away during Takii's birth, leaving Takii to her father and older brother. After her mothers death Takii's father locked himself away from the world before deciding to leave the family forever when Takii was just four years old. Takii cant remember her father even tho he stayed untill she was four years old, he started to swear up and down that she was her mother and he basically went crazy just leaving the kids to fend on their own. Her brother took over after their father left he was only 9 years old when their father left but he cared for his little sister and was alittle too overprotective of her at times often caring for her wounds himself out of fear that someone would harm her. If you ask Takii who her best friend from her childhood was she would tell you her brother.
~Academy
Takki entered the Sunagakure academy at age 11 with her brother who was 16 at the time. Takki loved to fight, her brother on the other hand hated fighting and was just there to look out for his little sister which is what was his down fall. Other academy kids couldent stand him and one night Takki had awoken with nightmares so she went looking for her brother only to find his breathless body, he was challenged and killed by the other kids. After his death Takii's personality started to show and she trained as hard as she could learning that she was a natural with war fans. Takii soon graduated the academy.
~Genin
After reaching Genin rank Takii trained even harder with her war fans, she struggles with her chakra most of the time. Her speed and power is a thing to fear as a fight is where she's most relaxed.
Skills and Abilities
Advanced Skills:
* Ninjutsu:
* Genjutsu: 0
* Taijutsu: 0
* Kenjutsu: 0
* Weapons Master: 5
* Puppetry: 0
* Fuuinjutsu: 0
* Ijutsu: 0

Unique Abilities:
* Major: Master with fans; while using war fans Speed and Strength increased by 1.
Weaknesses:
* Major: Takki tends to become too cocky during fights which often leads to her underestimating oppenents. During this her intelligence and wisdom goes down by two for the start of a fight for three posts.
* Minor: Her brother; she gets hot headed when people talk about him leading to realationships with other people being damaged. When like this intelligence and charisma drops by 1 until going to a new topic.
Stats:
* Strength: 6
* Constitution: 5
* Stamina: 5
* Dexterity: 5
* Speed: 6
* Intelligence: 5
* Wisdom: 4
* Charisma: 4

Role-play Sample:(Optional)

Over all looks good, but a few things to fix.

Check wording and spelling in history. I am not sure what you meant by this sentence.

Quote :

Takki loved to fight her brother on the hand hated fighting and was just there to look out for his little which is what was his down fall.

Advanced Skills you only get five not 6.

UA(Unique Abilities) Your Major one "Master with her fans" Please explain this in more detail.
Example:
*Major: Master with fans; while using war fans Speed and Strength increased by 1.

Weaknesses need a little more detail as well.
* Major: Takki tends to become too cocky during fights which often leads to her underestimating oppenents. During this her intelligence and wisdom goes down by two for the start of a fight for three posts.
* Minor: Her brother; she gets hot headed when people talk about him leading to realationships with other people being damaged. When like this intelligence and charisma drops by 1 until going to a new topic.

Okay ready to go.